enigma

Hello guys... been busy lately... anyway im posting my update for my scene. my first colored trial. cheers..

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julie hsieh

Wow...with material it really comes alive! The atmosphere has a good feel to it and lots of action going on to illustrate your story, but if I have to think of a critique, I would say that this is precisely your challenge, because there is so much going on, it makes the image feel a little bit busy for me.

For one example,say your sky is so nice but then it seems to compete with your work. In another instance, I feel that your main building is so nicely done but the very brightly lit interior of the basement level steals attention away from it. I almost want to tone that the overall brightness level of the surrounding context down so that it has more of a contrast and make a balance of focus on one central area of your image rather than everywhere.

I think I am sorta having similar struggle with mine actually...but I digress.

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neil09

Very nice busy evening but the textures are too clean......

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Neha

Lovely work, especially the attention to details! But I would agree with Julie that there is a lot going on there to eshtablish the view's focus at one place. Perhaps if you use DOF, this will bring your building into focus.

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nok li

Hi enigma
The whole effect is very good. But I think the lighting controlling is a little messy, so that the visual centre of the whole image is not distinctive.
I think you can handle the lighting from strong to weak in turn: the church—>the glass near the stairs—>the relative area along the river—>bank of the river—>the plaza outside the church—>sky. The levels of the lighting will be better. Just my own opinion.

zoli

Wow, you don' need to sleep? You're fast. Anyway things are really starting to compete here for our attention, that's true. And what seems to be a bigger problem here, is different lighting of the different parts of the picture: (1) sky is right after sunset, we should see basically everithying without artificial lighting at that time; (2) the horizontal middle part is dawn, (and is a great dawn for sure), and the lower right corner at the coffee shop is dark night. Try to bring lights together, I know you can... (And sg else: what does so many people do here at this time? At what time? I am getting lost uhhhhh ))

CHE

Nice update Bryan. I really like the atmosphere in your scene. Also the monochromatic color scheme that you choose is very interesting. I don't know if I like the 3D guy on the left nor the horse. Also, the hase on the left is a bit strong.

liuxianfang

Hi Bryan Jumarang,You have to pay attention to two points: 1. The clouds in the sky is too Parallel to the horizon. 2.The lights of the playground is too balance, maybe should make some changes! Good luck!

xrowdac

..Looking gr888t....

There.. All the best to you..buddy.

noart_2004

great artwork...The lights are awsome... and now it is not monochrome..
congrats...