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Old May 17th, 2007   #1 (permalink)
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I think you still have a problem with scale.
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This is what I mean.
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Why would the people be that huge though?
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They wouldn't. The people are there to illustrate my point about the camera position making the building look miniature.
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it does look cramped up though... requires some relaxation and yes about that scale issue
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Hello

I agree with Aaron. Aarons PS picture show that scale men be well-fitting to trees... so buildings are too small or trees are overscaled. This looks how arcades would be fence. I think that meybe without benches and stylized gate on foreground this would be more probably.
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I also agree with that , the size of the torii is not good .
I agree with aaron, but his example a little hypertie.
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I also agree with that , the size of the torii is not good .
I agree with aaron, but his example a little hypertie.
I'm just trying to help. The people were added to support my point about the odd scale. I'm not trying to be offensive. What's hypertie? To me, the problem is obvious. I made this criticism in the previous wip. After that went unanswered, I made the photo to try and clear things up. I'm done trying to help now.
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