Ziye -WIP

slinley · May 18th, 2007

Looks nice but the scale of the wooden jetty seems too small in comparison to the house and I'm not sure about the angle of your sun.

nok li · May 18th, 2007

General effect is good ,such as light and texture is controlling well,the texture of the glass should be improved .

CHE · May 18th, 2007

Very nice update Ziye. I like the weathered look in the house. The reflections on the lake are beautiful. The lighting is nice but your sky has to compliment it. Right now they are not mixing well together.

enigma · May 18th, 2007

I agree with most of the comments they said feng,other than that, your scene is very lovely.

julie hsieh · May 18th, 2007

Very pretty and lovely! Lighting, env't are all great. The water and reflections are beautifully expressed.

The only thing that sticks out is the very contrasty and very large material for the rotunda. Fix that and maybe give more variation in the trees of the background and you are allllll done.

BR1AN · May 19th, 2007

Hey, your final turned out great. I like the texture on the house and the windows look nice. The water also looks great, has that calm feel. I think the grass texture looks too stretched and some of the trees could use some work. Nice work.

-Brian

noart_2004 · May 21st, 2007

congrats....
Your insertion with the pic is very good....
I don't like any textures ( in the fullcircle , the texture seems to big)....
But great work.....

May 18th, 2007	#2 (permalink)
slinley Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Leeds Age: 29 Posts: 34 Name: Stuart Linley	Re: Ziye -WIP Looks nice but the scale of the wooden jetty seems too small in comparison to the house and I'm not sure about the angle of your sun.

May 18th, 2007	#3 (permalink)
nok li Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Beijing Posts: 30 Name: Lu JinLong	Re: Ziye -WIP General effect is good ,such as light and texture is controlling well,the texture of the glass should be improved .

May 18th, 2007	#4 (permalink)
CHE Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: St. Louis Posts: 820 Name: Ernesto Pacheco	Re: Ziye -WIP Very nice update Ziye. I like the weathered look in the house. The reflections on the lake are beautiful. The lighting is nice but your sky has to compliment it. Right now they are not mixing well together.

May 18th, 2007	#5 (permalink)
enigma Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Imus, Cavite, PH Age: 29 Posts: 342 Name: Bryan Jumarang	Re: Ziye -WIP I agree with most of the comments they said feng,other than that, your scene is very lovely. __________________ WIP...

May 18th, 2007	#6 (permalink)
julie hsieh Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Toronto Age: 31 Posts: 70 Name: Julie Hsieh	Re: Ziye -WIP Very pretty and lovely! Lighting, env't are all great. The water and reflections are beautifully expressed. The only thing that sticks out is the very contrasty and very large material for the rotunda. Fix that and maybe give more variation in the trees of the background and you are allllll done. __________________ Jogo Capoeira pra pode me libertar...

May 19th, 2007	#7 (permalink)
BR1AN Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 111 Name: Brian Clark	Re: Ziye -WIP Hey, your final turned out great. I like the texture on the house and the windows look nice. The water also looks great, has that calm feel. I think the grass texture looks too stretched and some of the trees could use some work. Nice work. -Brian

May 21st, 2007	#8 (permalink)
noart_2004 Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Paris Age: 34 Posts: 48 Name: Patterlini benoit	Re: Ziye -WIP congrats.... Your insertion with the pic is very good.... I don't like any textures ( in the fullcircle , the texture seems to big).... But great work.....

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