Fan Wu-WIP(May 18)

cg.fan · May 18th, 2007

hi everyone,this tow images are my recently work.And I choose the named Fan1 to be my final angle view.

julie hsieh · May 18th, 2007

Fan Wu,

Nice feel to the rendering. Though too much backdrop to the right , maybe crop a little bit off? I feel that the builing needs to appear bigger in proportion of your composition. But this is going to be dramatic context for the building for sure! Keep working.

henry_lkg · May 18th, 2007

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Originally Posted by julie hsieh

Fan Wu,

Nice feel to the rendering. Though too much backdrop to the right , maybe crop a little bit off? I feel that the builing needs to appear bigger in proportion of your composition. But this is going to be dramatic context for the building for sure! Keep working.

他在说你的角度有点问题哦，我开始也说过。你真的打算就用这个角度啦？

CHE · May 19th, 2007

The texture work is great. I still think that your camera is too far away from the building. Also, environment looks a little bit plane right now.

liuxianfang · May 19th, 2007

Nice feel to the rendering，I think you shoule think twice about the building in the background's proporting and position，Waiting for your final image.

noart_2004 · May 21st, 2007

we are waiting for your final cut...
good work...

May 18th, 2007	#2 (permalink)
julie hsieh Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Toronto Age: 31 Posts: 70 Name: Julie Hsieh	Re: Fan Wu-WIP(May 18) Fan Wu, Nice feel to the rendering. Though too much backdrop to the right , maybe crop a little bit off? I feel that the builing needs to appear bigger in proportion of your composition. But this is going to be dramatic context for the building for sure! Keep working. __________________ Jogo Capoeira pra pode me libertar...

May 19th, 2007	#4 (permalink)
CHE Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: St. Louis Posts: 820 Name: Ernesto Pacheco	Re: Fan Wu-WIP(May 18) The texture work is great. I still think that your camera is too far away from the building. Also, environment looks a little bit plane right now.

May 19th, 2007	#5 (permalink)
liuxianfang Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: beijing Posts: 160 Name: xianfang liu	Re: Fan Wu-WIP(May 18) Nice feel to the rendering，I think you shoule think twice about the building in the background's proporting and position，Waiting for your final image.

May 21st, 2007	#6 (permalink)
noart_2004 Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Paris Age: 34 Posts: 48 Name: Patterlini benoit	Re: Fan Wu-WIP(May 18) we are waiting for your final cut... good work...

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