Miao miao Lin Story Board

miaomiao lin · May 27th, 2007

Hi,everybody
This is my story board
please comment on

BR1AN · May 28th, 2007

Hello, my first reaction would be to show the architecture more. I like how you are building up the environment shots, but more shots of the building would help I think.

CHE · May 28th, 2007

I agree with the previous comments. It would be nice to see more of the building. Also, I am wondering what happen to all that ice and snow from your final still submission.

Ernesto

miaomiao lin · May 28th, 2007

Quote:

Originally Posted by BR1AN

Hello, my first reaction would be to show the architecture more. I like how you are building up the environment shots, but more shots of the building would help I think.

2,3,4,5.and 8 all mainly illustrate the architecture,only adding more environmental factors to make the building more vivid and lively

miaomiao lin · May 29th, 2007

Quote:

Originally Posted by CHE

I agree with the previous comments. It would be nice to see more of the building. Also, I am wondering what happen to all that ice and snow from your final still submission.

Ernesto

the still rendering expressed the consequence hunman beings would encounter if we continue destroying the earth. The animation want to give the warning before the snowstorm coming,
which is more close to our life. I will not intentionlly show the ice and snow in the animation since it is there in the still rendering

miaomiao lin · May 29th, 2007

[quote=miaomiao lin;165841]The still rendering expressed the consequence hunman beings would encounter if we continue destroying the earth. The animation want to give the warning before the snowstorm coming,which is more close to our life. I will not intentionlly show the ice and snow in the animation since it is there in the still rendering

miaomiao lin · May 29th, 2007

Thank, comment on

enigma · May 29th, 2007

Wow, this will turn out so great for sure! with all these sequences and effects integrated! Good luck miao miao!

wodewil · May 29th, 2007

Hej!

I'm a little afraid that it is too risky to run so far avay from Your first_challenge final_submision. (great picture). I think that it would be welcome to show (for example) frozing grass at the final. It is only my opinion.

See U

liuxianfang · May 31st, 2007

Hi Lin,You are great ! Come on! Best wishes to you!

May 28th, 2007	#2 (permalink)
BR1AN Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 111 Name: Brian Clark	Re: Miao miao Lin Story Board Hello, my first reaction would be to show the architecture more. I like how you are building up the environment shots, but more shots of the building would help I think.

May 28th, 2007	#3 (permalink)
CHE Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: St. Louis Posts: 820 Name: Ernesto Pacheco	Re: Miao miao Lin Story Board I agree with the previous comments. It would be nice to see more of the building. Also, I am wondering what happen to all that ice and snow from your final still submission. Ernesto

May 29th, 2007	#6 (permalink)
miaomiao lin Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: beijing Posts: 100 Name: miaomiao lin	Re: Miao miao Lin Story Board [quote=miaomiao lin;165841]The still rendering expressed the consequence hunman beings would encounter if we continue destroying the earth. The animation want to give the warning before the snowstorm coming,which is more close to our life. I will not intentionlly show the ice and snow in the animation since it is there in the still rendering

May 29th, 2007	#7 (permalink)
miaomiao lin Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: beijing Posts: 100 Name: miaomiao lin	Re: Miao miao Lin Story Board Thank, comment on

May 29th, 2007	#8 (permalink)
enigma Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Imus, Cavite, PH Age: 29 Posts: 342 Name: Bryan Jumarang	Re: Miao miao Lin Story Board Wow, this will turn out so great for sure! with all these sequences and effects integrated! Good luck miao miao! __________________ WIP...

May 29th, 2007	#9 (permalink)
wodewil Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Wroclaw Posts: 229 Name: Lukasz Truchalski	Re: Miao miao Lin Story Board Hej! I'm a little afraid that it is too risky to run so far avay from Your first_challenge final_submision. (great picture). I think that it would be welcome to show (for example) frozing grass at the final. It is only my opinion. See U

May 31st, 2007	#10 (permalink)
liuxianfang Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: beijing Posts: 160 Name: xianfang liu	Re: Miao miao Lin Story Board Hi Lin,You are great ! Come on! Best wishes to you!

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