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| Challenge #1 - WIP This forum contains all of the WIP and submissions and critiques for Challenge #1 |
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April 18th, 2008
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Location: Wellington
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Name: CAROLINE BOETZELEN   |
Caroline Boetzelen - WIP
Hello Everyone,
This is my first challenge ever and pretty excited to be involved in it with all of you. Some ideas about my project: This is a preliminary sketch image for my concept for the visitor center. Currently thinking of progressing it as a night shot. The design aims to compress the experience of arrival and movement between the foreground statue and the tower through a strongly horizontal architectural / landscape form. This inhabitable horizon reinforces the vertical of the tower and ensures its continued presence as the primary figure in the landscape. |
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April 19th, 2008
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Re: Caroline Boetzelen - WIP
Nice idea Caroline. It is a little difficult to visualize your concept from your sketch right now. It would be nice to see a perspective or plan view of it.
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April 20th, 2008
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Re: Caroline Boetzelen - WIP
I like this panoramic concept. imo you should place something on the far right side of the image close to the road to just block the eye from exiting the picture, nothing major, lamp post or something resembling the shape of the tower and statue. You now have two shapes (tower and statue) and putting a third in that is not to prominent but helps the eye coming back will help give a very strong composite. having repetition is always good
I hope you give us another update |
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April 21st, 2008
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Name: Jakub Gabriel  |
Re: Caroline Boetzelen - WIP
Yep 3d would be nice - or at least some more advanced WIP sketches. 4 days left time to get a grip on things!
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April 24th, 2008
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Re: Caroline Boetzelen - WIP
Caroline emailed me earlier this week to let me know she had to drop out of the competition.
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