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| Challenge #2 - WIP This forum contains all of the WIP and submissions and critiques for Challenge #2 |
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May 5th, 2008
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Re: Ernesto Pacheco - WIP
Looking nice. The water needs some ripples and waves I think. Other than that its ok apart but definetaly slower as you mentioned.
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May 6th, 2008
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Re: Ernesto Pacheco - WIP
Yeah I think this camera speed is way better, but one comment I personally think that with a structure like yours you should start off within the layers and between the paths and the zoom out to the whole. Its kind of a teaser to how grand its is,, what it is, ya know!? especially that you have lots of shapes to slide along.
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May 7th, 2008
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Re: Ernesto Pacheco - WIP
I'll leave my concerns over the design aside here.
I agree with Yasmin on the point of start small end big, maybe you can highlight localised features before telling the big picture. As mentioned in another discussion, a storyboard isn't necessarily required by the competition but if would go a long way to help you formulate your camera paths first. |
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May 12th, 2008
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Re: Ernesto Pacheco - WIP
Here is my second WIP. I am planning to incorporate a little cinematic piece (2D) of the battle between Hercules (tower) and the Giant (museum/tourists center) at the beginning of the animation. It will be very conceptual so I am not aiming for realism for this sequence.
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May 12th, 2008
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Re: Ernesto Pacheco - WIP
nothing linked mate. check again?
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May 19th, 2008
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Re: Ernesto Pacheco - WIP
Che you forgot to add a link there
 Long time no work progress hope your doing fine. 5 days left pump it up 
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May 19th, 2008
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Re: Ernesto Pacheco - WIP
I just wanted to let you all know that I have decided to pull out of the competition. I haven't been able to find the time to put into the animation and I am afraid I will not be able to finish it on time. I want to wish all the remaining competitors the best in the final round.
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