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Khaiyam's Tomb & Garden
Hey ,
Ok This is My Last Render after 2 days working on rendering parametres and Sun postions , This came out and i think it looks good  any way i need your C&C to prove it's quality ... Thanx in advice  Modeled in Rhinoceros 4 SR4 Textured in MAX 2009 Rendered in Vray 1.5 Render Time : 45 min Post Production in Photoshop
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Re: Khaiyam's Tomb & Garden
Hi Alless,
I like it a lot, very nice and calm image. Maybe some dof will improve it a bit. What did you use for trees? Best regards Srdjan
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Re: Khaiyam's Tomb & Garden
Thanx Sergio For your attention ,
Well TBH I really don't know where and when to use DOF effect . I mean I don't Know it's Theory ... that where it makes image improve ... about trees , They are "Arch Model VOL 52" a collection of Tree models ready to render with vray . For this I converted them to Proxies ... Good luck
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Re: Khaiyam's Tomb & Garden
beautiful work. i love the lighting, atmosphere - and obviously - the structure.
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Re: Khaiyam's Tomb & Garden
Thanks Alless,
dof is depth of field, and what it does, maind odject appears in focus, and closer and further objects become more or less blurry. this is camera setup. To be hones with you, I still did not use it, bur felt, that might be usefull for this image. Best regards Srdjan
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Re: Khaiyam's Tomb & Garden
Is that Omar Khayam's tomb? the author/philosopher?
lovely structure.. and an excellent render!
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Re: Khaiyam's Tomb & Garden
Thanx Dudes for Nice Comments , My Next project is Hafiz Tomb ! (another Poet)
about Khayyam ... Yeah he has 4 characters ... Poet ... philosopher ... Mathematician ... Astronomer ! More Info about Him : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Omar_Khayy%C3%A1m
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Re: Khaiyam's Tomb & Garden
Nice render and model.
I personally wouldn't add DOF. Not unless there were branches or similar jutting into the foreground. It works best as an effect in macro or close up shots and makes ordinary shots look weird or out of scale unless it's very subtle.
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Re: Khaiyam's Tomb & Garden
Well done, alless. Do you intend on doing a small series of renders for each structure? I figure it would be interesting to see an aerial shot of something like that.
Looking forward to seeing the Hafiz tomb too... seems like there's some detailed texturing ahead for you. |
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