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Old September 15th, 2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default Some of my works

Hi everyone, this is my first post here. So I'm uploading some of my old work. They're about 3-4 years old both perspectives and photomontages. This is my job, what I do for a living so I'd like to get alot better at rendring, saving time and make better models. Then they can pay me more

Software I use now:
Autocad Architectural 2008
3Dstudio Max Design 2009
Photoshop 7
But I prolly used the earlier versions when I made these images.
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I would say that Photoshop 7 is already pretty old.

Your compositing is quite good.

The glass reflections in that first image are pretty strong and don't seem to match the background sky so well. I realize that the sunset is behind me, but the sky behind the house seems to be a different time of day.

In the last two images, the wood texture is dark and unitelligible. It is doesn't have much depth.
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Your compositing is quite good.

The glass reflections in that first image are pretty strong and don't seem to match the background sky so well. I realize that the sunset is behind me, but the sky behind the house seems to be a different time of day.

In the last two images, the wood texture is dark and unitelligible. It is doesn't have much depth.
completely agree.besides i love the montaging of 2nd image.
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This is some of my latest work.

The first one is my own office on the ground floor, and we're extending the yellow building to the right. It's quite difficult to match an existing building, takes alot of testing to get the same colors and shadows.

The other ones are from a building that are soon to be finished in real life. I'll take some photographs from that one and upload them too to compare.
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I would say that Photoshop 7 is already pretty old.

Your compositing is quite good.

The glass reflections in that first image are pretty strong and don't seem to match the background sky so well. I realize that the sunset is behind me, but the sky behind the house seems to be a different time of day.

In the last two images, the wood texture is dark and unitelligible. It is doesn't have much depth.
It's the norwegian sunset in january. This is the original photo actually, so I've used a simple model to see how the building is going to be like, then photoshopped it. You can see that the roof-tiles doesn't add up on the edited picture. This is the original untouched :
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