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Old September 19th, 2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default The Tomb of Hafez

Hey ,
as I said ... I was working this week on Hafez Tomb , Persian poet . This Tomb Placed in Shiraz , And I really Suggest you go there one day
more info about Hafez :
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hafez

Modeling Program : Rhinoceros 4 SR4
Rendered in Vray
Textured in MAX 2009
PostProduction : photoshop CS3

I rendered it in 4 Different splits and then joined them in PS cuz it was Eating So much memory

C&C plz ...
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Default Re: The Tomb of Hafez

nice work, my only crit is that some of the trees are not looking right
How close is the tomb of sheikh saadi from this tomb?
How long did it take to render when it was split?
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nice work, my only crit is that some of the trees are not looking right
How close is the tomb of sheikh saadi from this tomb?
How long did it take to render when it was split?
Tanx dude ,
Well in Shiraz they are a bit far from each other ... I Love Saedi's Shrine too ,
I Guess Persian Tombs Have a Great Architecture , The Reason is ... Every Tomb Structure and Architecture in Persia Depends on the Character of the Man Who Slept there .... I mean the Architecture is Based on humankind .

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Default Re: The Tomb of Hafez

hi,
congratulation nice work.keep working we need to see more graceful work.

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Default Re: The Tomb of Hafez

The modeling is very interesting and the idea is good. Be careful with the light though. Your scene looks very good but it doesn't feel natural. Unless you're not trying to achieve photorealism, careful with the lighting. Try to use photometric lights whenever possible because they're based on real world lights (like vraysun or mr sun). Nevertheless, congrats. Nice job.
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