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Name: Tay Al-Rawi    |
Mesopotamia Museum
The Sustainable Machine....This Design Brings together the History and the net-zero energy consuming building...in relation to the occupant life and urban contexts...with this concept we've tried to achieve the idea of the creative city.....
This is an environment for a feature film production. C & C are Welcomed. Modeled in Maya ... Rendered in Mentalray .... Composited in PS. |
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September 25th, 2008
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Re: Mesopotamia Museum
Dears....Thanks for your comments...
I've satisfied with the trees.....I think they needs some color adjustments... Also...I'll make the street's white marks alittle bit smaller. thanks raymond and royalblue again Cheers Tay Othman |
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September 25th, 2008
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Re: Mesopotamia Museum
I don't think the trees spoil the image, what kills me is the signage.... so much attention paid to the architecture and then you just grab an over used font and slap a name on the building. It takes down the professional level of the image in my opinion.
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September 25th, 2008
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Re: Mesopotamia Museum
Interesting design...Frank Lloyd Wright meets Jetsons? This looks like something from a 70's magazine ad...
I like the composition, but I think you could still zoom in closer on the building. The cars or the width of the road lanes (or both) are out of scale. The green is too dark on the trees and too bright on the grass. The image also looks muddy to me, there is no crispness to the lighting. |
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September 25th, 2008
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Re: Mesopotamia Museum
Thanks Guys for Critiques...Hope this will improve my work...
1-the Text : I've Concluded that the text inside the image in this form has a negative impact on the whole design....I'll Try to Rethink about the current form and placement. 2-The Trees : I'll Re-adjust the threes and grass colors to Give a Crisper look 3-The cars and streets : cars are to scale , but the street is out..! Problem will be Fixed. Thanks Guys for you great encouragements and Replies.. Best regards //Tay Othman |
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September 27th, 2008
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Re: Mesopotamia Museum
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is this the hall of justice, where the superfreinds are at home? |
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Re: Mesopotamia Museum
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Can't Understand what you mean...con you explain more Briefly? Forgive me for my Poor English. |
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