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Old September 25th, 2008   #1 (permalink)
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helow everyone!im here again, i just wanna share my newest project, new asia golf en spa resort location in the philipines..coments en crit i realy apreciate!tnx! heres some of interiors! massage room:
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I think their name needs to be displayed more...
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the texture on that wall is obviously tiling
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I'm an Architect, newbie to the CG world and to this forum also, and I have a suggestion to make about this section where you publish your work.
I think you should always mention the software you used for each image, because it would be a great way of comparing results in different software.


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I'm an Architect, newbie to the CG world and to this forum also, and I have a suggestion to make about this section where you publish your work.
I think you should always mention the software you used for each image, because it would be a great way of comparing results in different software.


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tnx to all, i really apreciate ur koment en i will consider that in my next post
by the way all images are done in max2009+vray1.5sp2+photoshop!tnx again for viewing
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Pedro - welcome! Very good suggestion.

I always include the software, version, and render when I post a problem - it's just common sense to me. Some people forget or don't think it's important.
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Sandman Ninja, thank you.

By the way, I know I should open a new post just for this (and I will do it ASAP), but just for starters, what do you think is a good software for making architectural 3D presentations? I wanted one with good tutorials for a fast learning curve. I tried Maya, and I'm sure thatīs a great piece of powerful software, but I can't find any tutorials for it oriented for an architectural use.

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Sandman Ninja, thank you.

By the way, I know I should open a new post just for this (and I will do it ASAP), but just for starters, what do you think is a good software for making architectural 3D presentations? I wanted one with good tutorials for a fast learning curve. I tried Maya, and I'm sure thatīs a great piece of powerful software, but I can't find any tutorials for it oriented for an architectural use.

(note: I always use ACAD for 2D)

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Looking pretty good, Edwin. I like the the last shot best. Nice glow on lamps, beds look pretty good, plants are sweet! (Make 'em yourself or are they store boughten?) Also helps that the interior designer went with an attractive scheme. The dining room is fine. Glass is a little distracting, may want to just hide that. Lighting is over the shoulder, flattening things a little bit. Also, tough choice by the interior designers on the materials. The wood looks cheap (well modelled, but wood mats could be richer.) The hall pic is... well, it's a decent hall. Doorframes floating away from wall? Not sure if that's a TV at the end of the hall or a picture, if a picture, might want to knock back that glow on it, seems pretty bright to not be casting light all over the place. The lobby is pretty good. Floor could use displacement, but other than that, looking pretty solid! Pretty well polished images! Might want to add a little glow in post to the highlights to make stuff pop, but overall, pretty good job here! Keep up the good work!
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Looking pretty good, Edwin. I like the the last shot best. Nice glow on lamps, beds look pretty good, plants are sweet! (Make 'em yourself or are they store boughten?) Also helps that the interior designer went with an attractive scheme. The dining room is fine. Glass is a little distracting, may want to just hide that. Lighting is over the shoulder, flattening things a little bit. Also, tough choice by the interior designers on the materials. The wood looks cheap (well modelled, but wood mats could be richer.) The hall pic is... well, it's a decent hall. Doorframes floating away from wall? Not sure if that's a TV at the end of the hall or a picture, if a picture, might want to knock back that glow on it, seems pretty bright to not be casting light all over the place. The lobby is pretty good. Floor could use displacement, but other than that, looking pretty solid! Pretty well polished images! Might want to add a little glow in post to the highlights to make stuff pop, but overall, pretty good job here! Keep up the good work!
hey bro! tnx for kommment en apreciate, im glad you like my work, yah! i agree with your comment,actually all of the images are too rush, my client his gave me a deadline, within 2 days we need to submit finish or not finish, if i have tym i will update all images. by the way its my own design but the glass en sticker base from my client tnx again bro!

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