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Old September 28th, 2008   #1 (permalink)
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Hi, guys! Here is a house project of ours. This is a little strange type of houses for three brothers. The projects is conceptual so the idea for road drop out at least for now. The soft is max 2008, vray and ps. C&C are welcome,



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Well, I must say, I'm not a huge fan of the architecture, but do like the renderings.. They have a very nice soft look... Very nice grass and foliage; how did you go about creating the grass?
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I really loved the massing. Only a single comment the flowers seem to be huge to me in comparision to the building. But you have mentioned that this is the basic stuff i am sure you will change it in the final image. The renderings are nice
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Nice work, Love the feel. I would also like to know how you achieved the grass. Keep up the great wok.
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Thanks for the comments.

CarlAhearne, Aaron Waller,
the grass is just a grass with mix in the difuse chanel, combining three different types of textures, the grass plane has vray displacement.

Here are some of the same shots but with better quality (the uploading on the server of cgarchitect seems to reduce the quality of the images):






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Im afraid I find the design truly hideous....

Rendering wise, Id say its mainly the glass that needs work, the site looks ok but the modeling, lighting and materials need work on the buildings. The exposure is a little flat as well.
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