alfienoakes

Maybe one day I will be lucky enough to be incarcerated in a building like this..

Havent posted for ages, got a few on the go, but nowt really ready until today... Architecture not to everyone's liking Im sure, but its not about the architecture is it......

Anyway, Vray 1.5, ADT, Viz and post work thanks to Adobe... Any C&C's welcome...

Cheers

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Andy Wiggins

MAKING COFFEE.
Making a cup of coffee is like making love to a beautiful woman. It's got to be hot. You've got to take your time. You've got to stir... gently and firmly. You've got to grind your beans until they squeak. And then you put in the milk.

Swiss Tony.

Trevor Tizard

Hi Andy,

My first thoughts are.............

1 - Looks a bit flat. Timber texture is good but leadwork needs the same reflections and the brickwork is too uniform.

2 - There is some nasty tiling in the pavement in the foreground.

3 - Lift the camera target so there is more sky and less foreground.

4 - Is a little too saturated (may be my screen though).

5 - Glass could use a little attention - looks like tinted windows on a limo.

6 - Finally, the cropping of the image is wrong. Pull the camera back a bit to show more of the scene.

Hope this is of some help.

alfienoakes

Cheers Trevor:

1 - Looks a bit flat. Timber texture is good but leadwork needs the same reflections and the brickwork is too uniform.

The leadwork does have a similar reflection on it.. Just dont think there is as much to reflect. Brickwork I usually worry more about it not tiling.. its seems to be you cant have one without the other, or a Pshop pass I suppose..

2 - There is some nasty tiling in the pavement in the foreground.

Yep.. Struggled with that a bit.. I sort of lost interest..

3 - Lift the camera target so there is more sky and less foreground.

I wanted a persons view from ground level, and didnt want to see the roofs in the background that I hadnt modeled.

4 - Is a little too saturated (may be my screen though).

Yeah.. It does differ screen to screen.. Its something I do fret over thou.

5 - Glass could use a little attention - looks like tinted windows on a limo.

Glass came out really bad in this one, its the normal fresnel glass, with an overlay in PShop.. But it really didnt work for some reason. i always end up Pshopping glass, as straight out of Viz never works.. not enough surroundings, and my sky reflections look awful

6 - Finally, the cropping of the image is wrong. Pull the camera back a bit to show more of the scene.

Good reason for that too.... Didnt have data for the surrounds, or a price to recreate them..

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Andy Wiggins

MAKING COFFEE.
Making a cup of coffee is like making love to a beautiful woman. It's got to be hot. You've got to take your time. You've got to stir... gently and firmly. You've got to grind your beans until they squeak. And then you put in the milk.

Swiss Tony.

Trevor Tizard

3 - Lift the camera target so there is more sky and less foreground.

I wanted a persons view from ground level, and didnt want to see the roofs in the background that I hadnt modeled.

If you lift the camera target only and not the camera itself you wont see the rooves behind - you will need the camera correction though.

alfienoakes

Trevor...

That is very true..

Cheers

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Andy Wiggins

MAKING COFFEE.
Making a cup of coffee is like making love to a beautiful woman. It's got to be hot. You've got to take your time. You've got to stir... gently and firmly. You've got to grind your beans until they squeak. And then you put in the milk.

Swiss Tony.