For Sale

Macca23 · October 3rd, 2008

This piece is of a newly built apartment that's for sale. I decided to try and recreate the scene just to try and improve my skills. C&C welcome.

It is supposed to be empty, so i know it looks blank and boring. Apologies!

This is my first post on here and second image using Vray so welcome to all!

ankit4d · October 4th, 2008

i think the steel rods are very thick.

gods418 · October 4th, 2008

ok how much is it?

innerdream · October 4th, 2008

You've got some problems there. A stair tread is about 6" and you have 10 treads, that means your floor to floor is 5'. Unless this is an apartment for kneelers or little people it won't sell.

Macca23 · October 5th, 2008

Thanks for the replys. Ive gone off an image i found on the website for the apartment and used the same amount of stairs they have, maybe mine are just too close together? As for the price of it, its about £160,000 to buy, because of its location.

innerdream · October 5th, 2008

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Originally Posted by Macca23

Thanks for the replys. Ive gone off an image i found on the website for the apartment and used the same amount of stairs they have, maybe mine are just too close together? As for the price of it, its about £160,000 to buy, because of its location.

It's important to use real world scale. If you look at the hallway under the stairs in relation to the rest of the room there is no way a person could walk under there. It has nothing to do with how close the stairs are to each other, the entire room is not to scale.

Macca23 · October 5th, 2008

The hallway is over a metre wide, its the angle and the curvature of the wall that makes it look smaller than it is. Its hard to create it to scale when i dont have architectural plans to work from.

innerdream · October 5th, 2008

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Originally Posted by Macca23

The hallway is over a metre wide, its the angle and the curvature of the wall that makes it look smaller than it is. Its hard to create it to scale when i dont have architectural plans to work from.

Are you an Architect? You're trying to defend something that is not defendable.

By the way it's the height, not the width. Your stair rail is out of scale etc. etc. It's not right period.

You have a decent lighting setup though.

Are you using Max?

Macca23 · October 5th, 2008

Yeah am using Max 9. I'm no architect no.. Thank you for your comments anyway.

innerdream · October 5th, 2008

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Originally Posted by Macca23

Yeah am using Max 9. I'm no architect no.. Thank you for your comments anyway.

Paul,

You're at cgarchitect!

If you're going to try and make a go of Archviz you'll need to build things to scale or you'll get busted.

Keep up the good work.

October 4th, 2008	#2 (permalink)
ankit4d Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Chandigarh Posts: 74 Name: ANkit Saxena	Re: For Sale i think the steel rods are very thick. __________________ www.vrayexpert.com

October 4th, 2008	#3 (permalink)
gods418 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 152 Name: Michael Coloso	Re: For Sale ok how much is it?

October 4th, 2008	#4 (permalink)
innerdream Veteran Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: LA Posts: 566 Name: Robert M	Re: For Sale You've got some problems there. A stair tread is about 6" and you have 10 treads, that means your floor to floor is 5'. Unless this is an apartment for kneelers or little people it won't sell.

October 5th, 2008	#5 (permalink)
Macca23 Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Bury - Manchester Age: 23 Posts: 11 Name: Paul McGill	Re: For Sale Thanks for the replys. Ive gone off an image i found on the website for the apartment and used the same amount of stairs they have, maybe mine are just too close together? As for the price of it, its about £160,000 to buy, because of its location.

October 5th, 2008	#7 (permalink)
Macca23 Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Bury - Manchester Age: 23 Posts: 11 Name: Paul McGill	Re: For Sale The hallway is over a metre wide, its the angle and the curvature of the wall that makes it look smaller than it is. Its hard to create it to scale when i dont have architectural plans to work from.

October 5th, 2008	#9 (permalink)
Macca23 Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Bury - Manchester Age: 23 Posts: 11 Name: Paul McGill	Re: For Sale Yeah am using Max 9. I'm no architect no.. Thank you for your comments anyway.

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