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Re: school building
something just isn't right in your images, but i am having a hard time figuring out what it is. they seem very flat. maybe a bit of post-production tweaking is in order.
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Re: school building
For a start I'd reduce the saturation overall and pay more attention to the contrast/brightness of the people to make them fit in better. They are showing potential though!
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