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C&C welcome and appreciated.
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It is something different I agree but with this type of stylised look I guess it's down to personal preference whether you like it or not. Thanks for the c&c
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High client expectations?
I like what you have accomplished here. It reminds me of something I would see in WIRED magazine. You have a cool blend of 2D/3D elements. I think you could still push the image a little further quality-wise. I noticed that you still have a bit of GI artifacting in some of the shadow areas near the ceiling pipework. The figure that appears to be walking could probably benefit from a touch of motion blur. Finally, I think a little glow coming off the backlit pathway is warranted. Nice work...is the nightmare really over? |
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I felt the image could be pushed further too, just that when the job has been a nightmare you grow tired of looking at it and so don't actually looka at properly with a critical eye. I think you are right about the floor could have done a better glow there I feel. The ceiling could have had a lot more work put into it, just seems a little too flat I feel, but then again that would have taken too long to do and it wasn't really the focus of the image although it would have made the image better on the whole. People aaah yes the people always a talking point Thanks for the C&C
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