Fancy a Dip?

david.s · October 10th, 2008

Another interior done with vray. Does it make you want to jump in to the refreshing pool or what?

Feedback as always is greatly appreciated.

frank1331 · October 10th, 2008

Looks good. Two things that pop out at me.

1. Looks like the wood grain map is a little large.

2. THe water of the pool would cause a little more distrotion to the tiles at the bottom of the pool.

Kepp up the great work.

perspectivo3d · October 10th, 2008

What a good rendering

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you're awesome in transferring the mood of space to image rendering. It looks really relaxing and comfortable pool in your image.

slinley · October 16th, 2008

I Like it, I think your vertical wood needs a little work as the grain wouldn't be going in the direction shown, the beams would possibly be 2 seperate pieces.

I disagree with Frank about the tiles, I think for such still water you get a clear image thorugh the water with this natural distortion, almost like a bowing effect.

STRAT · October 16th, 2008

it's lovely, but too clean and clinical. in reality the scene would have more a 'natural' feel to it, ie, a slight distortion/shimmer to the water, some variance to the stark clean white ceiling, a less regular look/feel to the beams etc etc.

Also, a drainage grill around the edge would really set things off better

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frank1331 Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Age: 41 Posts: 175 Name: Frank Richarz	Re: Fancy a Dip? Looks good. Two things that pop out at me. 1. Looks like the wood grain map is a little large. 2. THe water of the pool would cause a little more distrotion to the tiles at the bottom of the pool. Kepp up the great work.

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perspectivo3d Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Bangkok Posts: 23 Name: Kittituch Nakaprawing	Re: Fancy a Dip? What a good rendering . you're awesome in transferring the mood of space to image rendering. It looks really relaxing and comfortable pool in your image. __________________ http://www.perspectivo3d.blogspot.com

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slinley Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Leeds Age: 29 Posts: 34 Name: Stuart Linley	Re: Fancy a Dip? I Like it, I think your vertical wood needs a little work as the grain wouldn't be going in the direction shown, the beams would possibly be 2 seperate pieces. I disagree with Frank about the tiles, I think for such still water you get a clear image thorugh the water with this natural distortion, almost like a bowing effect.

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STRAT Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Cardiff, Wales, UK. Age: 36 Posts: 6,488 Name: Stephen Leworthy	Re: Fancy a Dip? it's lovely, but too clean and clinical. in reality the scene would have more a 'natural' feel to it, ie, a slight distortion/shimmer to the water, some variance to the stark clean white ceiling, a less regular look/feel to the beams etc etc. Also, a drainage grill around the edge would really set things off better __________________

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