Marcin Dzieniszewski - Final

Martin Day · March 22nd, 2005

...and justice for all

Ernest Burden · March 27th, 2005

I didn't have high hopes for this picture with the WIPs, but WOW, what a finish!

I have no idea what it is, but its beautiful.

You could perhaps relate the round element at the base a bit more to the vertical light strip. How? I'm not sure, they just don't relate. Maybe if wee see the vertical light fall behind the base and link to the curved lights? Also, because of the corner of the base, I would expect the spikey surface to turn a corner there on the left. And the spikes on the base cornice are so small they almost get lost. Perhaps they could be a bit longer?

Graphically this image is very strng, even as the space is a bit confused. We have no idea of scale, which adds to the abstract nature of the piece.

hbetter · March 28th, 2005

Simple, curious and elegant.

Lon · March 29th, 2005

Very simple but very powerful. The lighting and monochromatic palette are very successful. The only thing that bothers me is that the top of the building is so foreboding, like it could be on a poster about injustice, and the lower part looks like maybe a theater entrance? I could be reading too far into things.

honzal · March 29th, 2005

What a strenght ! It reminds me RadioCity in much more powerful way.

Jan

matthewbannister · March 31st, 2005

Nice vantage point. Beautifully graphic. Reminiscent of the masters, especially Feris. A good example of how simple things can work beautifully. Almost like a charcoal drawing.

March 27th, 2005	#2 (permalink)
Ernest Burden Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Ossining, NY USA Posts: 4,999 Name: Ernest Burden III	Re: Marcin Dzieniszewski - Final I didn't have high hopes for this picture with the WIPs, but WOW, what a finish! I have no idea what it is, but its beautiful. You could perhaps relate the round element at the base a bit more to the vertical light strip. How? I'm not sure, they just don't relate. Maybe if wee see the vertical light fall behind the base and link to the curved lights? Also, because of the corner of the base, I would expect the spikey surface to turn a corner there on the left. And the spikes on the base cornice are so small they almost get lost. Perhaps they could be a bit longer? Graphically this image is very strng, even as the space is a bit confused. We have no idea of scale, which adds to the abstract nature of the piece. __________________ Ernest Burden III AcmeDigital architectural rendering

March 28th, 2005	#3 (permalink)
hbetter Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Boston Posts: 68 Name: Hansy Better	Re: Marcin Dzieniszewski - Final Simple, curious and elegant.

March 29th, 2005	#4 (permalink)
Lon Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cambridge, MA Posts: 64 Name: Lon Grohs	Re: Marcin Dzieniszewski - Final Very simple but very powerful. The lighting and monochromatic palette are very successful. The only thing that bothers me is that the top of the building is so foreboding, like it could be on a poster about injustice, and the lower part looks like maybe a theater entrance? I could be reading too far into things.

March 29th, 2005	#5 (permalink)
honzal Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Czech Republic Posts: 49 Name: Jan Rybar	Re: Marcin Dzieniszewski - Final What a strenght ! It reminds me RadioCity in much more powerful way. Jan

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matthewbannister Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: new york Age: 41 Posts: 68 Name: dbox matthew bannister	Re: Marcin Dzieniszewski - Final Nice vantage point. Beautifully graphic. Reminiscent of the masters, especially Feris. A good example of how simple things can work beautifully. Almost like a charcoal drawing.

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