Residential villa
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gregor sartin
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grabe mga critics d2 ah.haha.
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dogu guven
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the concrete garden wall in background is annoying.
Ryan Watson
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Materials and lighting are both pretty bad. Lots of tiling going on.
Foreground tree needs to be omitted entirely - currently destroying your composition.
Why are there cars parked on the lawn?
If they really are going to be parked there, render the grass the way it would be in real life - dead from lack of sunlight, and smashed due to the car's weight.
The person is pretty bad too. Would consider omitting or reworking.
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Tempest1295
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I agree with oana about the headlights. Might be textures are a bit off on it, or another reason they are showing up as so.
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Oana Vinatoru
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Hi, it seems to me the trees and cars block the view to the building too much and there is a distracting error on the car in the foreground, seems the headlights are missing? It's the first thing I noticed... think you should showcase the house better and work some more on the textures. Good luck!