Meditation place
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Karoly Hanzelik
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I made some changes. What do you think now?
Abdullah
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Anyway. in my humble opinion...
One cannot concentrate on meditation having a naked woman statues into the room. :D.
he will always be thinking that some is staring at me.!!
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Peter Jansson
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Ah As I hoped you'd make it :) then I suggest maybe making it even more narrow to make that clear, just a thought.
I forgot to mention what I changed:
Added glow to statuewall
Added overlay concrete texture to the leafs for a little variation
Moved the furniture
Added vignette effect
Brightened the image
Added shadows to the wall from the statue
Added highlight to statue left side
Added contrast to statue
Thought about adding water caustics to ceiling/right wall
Looking forward seeing this finished buddy
Karoly Hanzelik
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Hy!
The "walkway" is narrow, because I just wanted only the light come in, not for a people. You have right with the chairs, it looks better this way. I'll work on the leaf materials and the lights.
Thanks!
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Peter Jansson
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Hi
I think the perspective makes the walkway along the statue wall look really narrow, plus at a first glance I thought the leaves on the statue wall was just cut off but the right wall, perhaps moving the chairs so you can see the wall ending on the floor as well as on the roof? Or perhaps emphasizing the lighting on the statue wall more, make it a little more intense to shine the statue wall up some more?
It looks like your aiming for a morning shot so this might ruin that, but your could give it a try
Here's a paintover I did that might give you a hint what I mean
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Karoly Hanzelik
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Thanks for the comment. Yes, the leaves are not so realistic yet, I'll work on them.
The statue is from Evermotion Archmodels.
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Greg Law
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I can't help with the leaves other than if I was doing it I would model some and scatter them around.
I like the feel you have here other than the red leaves. They don't look very natural to me being one colour.
By the way where did you get the statue. I'm looking for statues like at at the moment.