Small Building
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Tempest1295
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I'm not sure, but sky doesn't look right, is it supposed to be cloudy?
Manoj Singh
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very nice...I like
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george sandoval
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hey - overall it looks good
some points:
curb curve should be smooth - not segmented
foreground car - too fancy -calls too much attention to itself - james bond?
foreground grass - might trim a bit
planting strip next to building should be filled with lush green bushes and flowers - not those
alien plant pods that are devouring that poor girl
sky should be bluer
leaves along sidewalk are calling too much attention to themselves - should be inconspicuous or gone
hi lite on bldg corner might be too cute-sy
errrr.......that rainbow flare is too bright
reflection on right set of windows seems broken up
I think you would do better with lush 2D trees
sidewalk texture looks a little funny - like you can't tell what it is
wood wall base is too white - it's front should be darker so it turns the corner
but aside from those 50 remarks, it looks pretty good