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thank you :) maybe if I have time I will rework some of things that you mentioned..
Amazing.
Great job
Me likes a lot, but I agree, there are a few issues to adress still. I'd start with the pond in the foreground. It looks pretty shallow, which is ok in itself, but you should consider, that water lillies require a certain depth (~60cm-1m, if I rember correctly) to flourish. Then I'd rework the leave texture of the willow and there are several edges, that have (or dont have) wrong mapping
This is a solid start but I agree others in that it could and should be pushed further. I find myself staring at a vacant patio, and I am left wondering what the story is.
I agree, nice composition and rendering. I would like to see it a little bit lighter, so you can make out a little more of the texture wall on the left. But this is a great start. Keep up the good work.
Looks real nice Ivan.. Welcome aboard.