Al Saleem Villa

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Anytime. I appreciate your courage in posting for critique. I'm a wimp an have never tried posting any of my images. However, kudos to you. It feels akward to offer criticism. Hopefully you know it is just my two cents. Good luck...and hope to see the final image...
Thank you Paul, I really appreciate your advise and I will keep it in my mind for the next render.
Nice start. My comments or suggestions are: 1.) Image appears to be over exposed. 2.) Some clouds would help add some realism to the sky. The plain blue is a little uninteresting. 3.) Asphalt pavement texture could be darker. 4.) Might want to experiment with HDRI lighting. This would give some subtle color hews that will add depth to the image. 5.) Grass looks realistic but the tone is very bright green. Perhaps saturated the color a tad. Same could be said about the background. If these are darkened a little, the building will pop even more. 6.) Add a environment reflection of clouds to the glass. or play with index of refraction. All the windows look the same and could use some variety. 7.) Add a concrete curb between the stone pavers and asphalt. Taper the curve at the driveway area. Otherwise the moped needs to climb over a curb. 8.) Perhaps add some foliage to the foreground. Teh composition could use some depth. 9.) Perhaps add a vignette to darken the edges and improve composition. Anyway, this is a nice start and these are just a few ideas.