"La Tristeza De Los Que Aman Con El Corazón" .02

Thank you Guys, I will improve the illustration with the comments, but first i will finish the series and then with your help I will make them better. thanks again, it is amazing how the comments encourage you to keep working :)

The woman doesn't look quite right. Can you try rotating her 90 degrees counter clockwise? I think that would improve the composition.

post of the week! :) great image. agree the AO needs to come down a little though. bit clay-like at the moment.

The woman doesn't look quite right. Can you try rotating her 90 degrees counter clockwise? I think that would improve the composition.

Nice and..........hot.......:P Agreed with Jonathan.........:)......The AO needs to be a little bit transparent.... Great job!

Hey Carlos.. nice image! The lady looks like she's sorta floating in the bed, but I know how difficult it would be to get this right. Otherwise, I think the AO pass is a bit too definited in this image. I'd lower the opacity of the AO pass.

Nice!