Landscape Roof

this has great protential, but let down by a couple of things (some already mentioned) the background is too low res and poor quality the planting is on plains and is not integrated too well more area shadow needed, together with a brighter more vibrant atmosphere depth and body needed on canopy structure less reflection on glass and less saturation on roof

I agree with Tristan and I would recommend a more dramatic sun in order to show more sharows. Also the background image is poor.

the plants are good. although the palm looks fake comparatively, a bit out of scale. the tensile structure and roof is a letdown.although its semi-transparent , there should still be some shades and shadows. this is not your fault, but the structure that supports the canvass is oversized.