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this is also quite good, but i think there are a few issues here. 1.) the size of the pool tiles makes it look quite shallow (or maybe the pool lacks depth?) 2.) the plants on the right seem to almost jump over the pool and into the foreground, yet they are obviously planted in the background. i can see maybe trying to do this for composition, but to me it feels uncomfortable. 3.) i like the soft lighting/shade conditions, but i wonder if more light and shadow would help with the architecture ? nice work again.

Thank you very much neko !! I will adjust the next time.^^

this is also quite good, but i think there are a few issues here. 1.) the size of the pool tiles makes it look quite shallow (or maybe the pool lacks depth?) 2.) the plants on the right seem to almost jump over the pool and into the foreground, yet they are obviously planted in the background. i can see maybe trying to do this for composition, but to me it feels uncomfortable. 3.) i like the soft lighting/shade conditions, but i wonder if more light and shadow would help with the architecture ? nice work again.

^ ^ ^ Sorry, I am starting post.