My first exterior in Max

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Thanks guys.! I will work on those. Thanks again.:)
Top most extended roof part is looking unrealistic. I guess this is what he meant.
Well, not exactly weird, but a bit unusual imo. Like the 2 roofs I don't know,something doesn't quite fit, but hey that's just me! Keep it up!
Thank you nanasba13. Just let me know what looks weird in the building according to you. I would like to improve on my skills and hence would like all the help that I could get. Thanks in advance!:)
I agree w Wrender on all points and I too am impressed being that this is your first project w Max. I really like your modeling, although a bit weird, IMO, but I can see you worked hard on it! Overall great for your first time, keep on practicing!
Thank you Wrender. Very useful tips, will make sure to take these into account. Thanks.:)
The modeling looks good - but here's a few things I'd work on: 1. Exemplify your focus with your entourage. In other words, frame the building with your trees, landscape, walls, etc. Right now, the palm tree and wall/lights in the foreground are dominating the image - leaving the building to be rather subdued. 2. You might try a more dynamic camera angle to captivate your audience. As is, the image is rather static. 3. Background information - I'd put a line of trees or buildings in the background to obscure the horizon line. Unless this is sitting on top of a hill, you would almost never see this much sky. 4. Your plants are too repetitive - try using different plant varieties with interesting clusters/groupings. The lawn is also to tiled - maybe try grass-o-matic/proxies for real grass blades? All in all, I'm impressed this is your first rendering in 3dmax. Just some artistic flare and this will be a great rendering!