Residential Interior
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Yassin Hanani
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Thank you Ryan for your feedback, it was my first work in Vray C4D, i'll try not to do the same mistakes the next times :d
Thank's Man!!!
Athanasios Karampitsakos
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I agree with Ryan 100%.
Ryan Watson
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My comments:
1. Scene is too dark. You have direct light - this should be scattering and bouncing a little more ambient light.
2. Materials - the wood floor appears to be at odds with itself. On the right, it looks like rough, high bump old wood. On the left it gets polished and shiny. Rarely do you find old rough shiny wood. Also, consider some reflections on the TV screen? Finally, I'm finding it difficult to understand the material applied to the cabinet the tv sits on. Unsure if its brown wood, or metal, etc...
3. Compositionally I think it's working - just enough to balance it all out. Nice shot.