Mountain View

thanks for comments!

Everything looks real good to me except the foreground chairs. There's something weird going on with their color/lighting.. almost as if they were not reflecting any GI.

true there is place for improvement but i found it nice sharp and clean in a stylish way Good work

I agree with braddewald, it looks a little artificial and flat.

a one point is usually reserved for a very formal presentation that this particular scene doesn't seem to call for. Also, the arrangement of the chairs directly in front of the camera and facing away forms a harsh barrier to the viewer which is probably not what you want to do. If you cut down on some of the foreground clutter, light the scene primarily by that gorgeous view and keep the faces parallel to the camera as a source of contrast, then it would pull the eye into the scene more and make the viewer feel more engaged.

Nice composition and framing. Some stuff looks a little artificial, but it's a great rendering overall.